Started yet another book

I guess I should try to finish what I have already started, but when the ideas come they come.  Diane and I have begun a new book as we just submitted our first book.  It should be interesting. I have posted an excerpt from it on my facebook page.  I will post one here too.  Feel free to leave a comment as I love to get new ideas and critiques.

“Don’t you think it’s about time to go, Dani?” Amanda shouted through the closed bathroom door.

“I’m almost there. Give me a sec,” Danielle shouted back through the door.  Amanda insisted on calling her Dani.  It was frustrating, but she put up with it.

“Really, Dani? The party will be over by the time you find an outfit.”  Amanda banged on the door and put her mouth right on it.  She wanted Dani to know how mad she was.  They had been planning on going to the frat party for two weeks.  Now all of a sudden Dani was stalling. 

“Okay,” Danielle said as she appeared at the door.  Amanda almost fell through right on her face.  Dani was standing there in a red lace top and snake skin pants. The pants were tight on her size sixteen frame.  She was round, but tonight she was going to embrace it.

“Wow, Dani!” Amanda squealed.  She starting jumping up and down, clapping.  To Danielle she looked like a little girl who just got the doll she asked for.  It was annoying.